Rough Draft of the Double Page Spread & Evaluations from Peers

Before continuing on the drafting of the article, I decided to first focus on the layout of the double page spread and see if the photographs look as planned. Here are the rough drafts:

After doing the rough draft, I decided to review it before going any further. To get an objective view of the spread, I asked some friends and peers to have a look at the pages and fill out an evaluation form about what they think. Here are 2 examples of the evaluations that I have scanned: