Wednesday 4 May 2011

Audience Feedback on the Final Magazine Pages

After having completed my magazine pages, I decided to see what my target audience actually thought about it ... So, I have devised a questionnaire:

1) Can you identify the genre of this magazine?




2) Can you identify the sub-genre of the music?



3) Can you identify the age-range that the magazine is targeted at?



4) Would you say that there is clear style to the magazine?



5) What would you say is the thing you like most about the magazine?



6) What do you like least about this magazine?



7) If the magazine was suitable to your music tastes, would you buy it?



8) How much would you pay for the magazine, if you were to buy it?

 
I have handed the questionnaire out to 20 people in my target audience after having shown them the pages of my magazine. Here are their responses:



Wednesday 22 December 2010

Evaluation

1. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?


1) The main sell-line is at the bottom of the page and opposed to the top, right-hand side 

Looking at various magazine covers, I realised that most magazine have the main sell-line on the top left-hand side of the cover (perhaps due to the traditional way in which people read and view a page). However, I decided to break away from this convention and have placed my main sell-line at the bottom. Although the sell-line is at the bottom, it still works well as the sell-line is rather bold and large - making it eye-catching and effectively leading the eyes straight-away to the sell-line.

2) Not as many thumbnail images

Another thing I noticed from looking at several music magazines is that most magazines tend to have a lot of thumbnail images included in the contents page - giving the readers sneak-peeks at what's included. I, on the other hand, decided to keep the contents page simple. Especially since I feel that my front cover was very busy due to the many sell-lines and thumbnail images. Therefore, to maintain a balance, I have kept the contents page simple with one main images and only 2 small thumbnails.

3) No editor's letter

Unlike many other music magazines, I decided to forego the editor's letter. This is due to the fact that although it allows the magazine to have a personal touch to it, I felt very little people would actually read the letter. This was further backed up when my questionnaire results showed that only 1/5th of my sample replied that they do indeed read the letter. Therefore, I decided on not wasting the space on the editor's letter and using it to add in more contents.

4) Subscription advertisement

I also noticed that all music magazines had the convention of including an advertisement for the subscription of the magazine somewhere in the magazine. This time, I, too, have decided to include the subscription advert into the contents page. This is largely due to the fact that my audience are people who are regular consumers of music magazines.

5) Bar code with information in it

I also realised that a lot of magazines have information on issue date and number, price and website address included in the bar code strip. E.g: 


I, too, have done this as I felt that since my front cover was already 'breaking the rules' with the main sell-line at the bottom and also had a tagline that was in italics (which is very uncommon in music magazines), so I felt I needed to give the reader something that is normal, so as to not throw them off completely - no matter how subtle.

6) There are quotes placed around the text 
Another common convention for magazines is that in articles, they often have a phrase or a quote that is extracted from the article and placed around the text. This effectively the breaks up the article and refrains it from being just a block of text, which can easily bore and overwhelm the reader. It also creates interest in the article as reader would see the quote, and want to know more - luring the reader to read the article.

2. How does your media product represent particular social groups?





My media product mainly represents females in the age-range of 16-14. In my music magazine, they are represented as:


1) A devoted music fan, particularly interested the indie, pop & rock genre


The particular social group represented in the magazine is young, female, music-lovers. They are also interested in a range of music genres, although they mainly listen to indie/rock. This can be seen through the use of dark, strong colours that are often associated with indie/rock genres. Also, there are references to artists such as ‘Kings of Leon’ in the Contents page.

 2) Appreciative of talented musician/singers and very interested in finding musical talents



The average ‘Music Core’ reader is appreciative of talented musician/singers, regardless of their style, language, etc and is very interested in finding musical talents who may not be involved in the mainstream music scene. This is depicted in the sell-lines in the front cover as there are references to finding 'hidden talents'. 

3)  A regular magazine buyer 

The group represented in 'Music Core' is very much of a regular music magazine consumer. Therefore, I have included an advertisement for the subscription of the magazine in the Contents page.

4) A festival-goer and is also fashion conscious

The group I have represented is also a regular festival goer due to their love of music. They are also very fashion conscious. So, I have merged these characteristics together to create a feature in the contents on 'Festival Fashion'. Also, the models in the front cover are wearing clothes that are stylish and on trend, but are also easily and cheaply re-creatable. 

5) Hard-working and has a deeper knowledge of the music industry than the average person

Another characteristic of the social groups, I want to represent in the magazine is that they are hard-workers. This is shown throughout the article in double-page spread as there are several references to working hard and wanting to grow, learn and achieve the best results. They are also more knowledgeable of music and the music industry than the average person. This is also shown in the article as, again, there are some references in relation to music that the average person may not know about - such as the references to layering, composing and arrangement of the music.
 

3. What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?



4. Who would be the audience for your media product?



5. How did you attract/address  your audience?

                           

1) Interested in Photography - The photographs are eye-catching

As established in my 'Reader Profile', my average reader is interested in photography. For this reason, I tried to make the photographs used in the magazine to be interesting and eye-catching. I did with the use of colours, lighting, and the mise-en-scene with the placement of the instruments. For example:



In this photograph, I have placed the lighting behind the model, giving her a soft glow and emphasising the soft, and calm feeling of the photograph.


Here, only a part of the guitar is showing with headphones and a mic at the side. In this photograph, i have played with mise-en-scene and only given hints of music, rather than placing the objects in an obvious way.

2) Interested in Shopping & Fashion - Clothes of models and references to fashion in the text in the  Contents page

My specific audience is also very interested in Fashion. Therefore, to cater to this interest of my reader, I have dressed my models in clothes that are the current trend such as lace tops and military-style jackets. I have also chosen to dress them this way as it's the type of style that girls in my target age range of 16-24 could potentially wear and re-create in an affordable way. I have put references to fashion in the contents page with the 'Festival Fashion' feature, which combines both music and fashion.

3) Interested in finding new talented artists - References to new artists in the sell-lines

The average reader for 'Music Core' is an avid music fan and likes paying attention to new artists and seperating who is good and who is not. They also like being on the look-out for artists who have already debuted but are not very well-known even though they produce good music. Therefore, in the front cover of the magazine, I have included the sell-line 'Upcoming Artist Alert!' and 'Hidden Talents Uncovered' so that this can straight attract the interest of the audience.

4) Interested in a variety of music - References to artists in sell-lines and in the contents page

My target audience is one that has an interest in a variety of music and not just indie/rock and not discriminative in reference to the genre of music. Because of this, I have included references to different artists in the sell-lines and in the contents page, such as the reference to 'Ellie Goulding' and 'Kings of Leon' - 2 artists of different genres, gender, and one is a soloist and the other a 4-member band.

5) Interested in music itself  - Musical instruments and equipment in all the pictures

In all of the pictures, there is at least one musical reference such as an iPod, or a guitar. This is due to the fact that 'Music Core's average reader is one that pays attention to every single detail of a song, including the various instruments used. So, I felt that adding in a range of musical instruments and equipment would succesfully attract that type of audience that the magazine is targeted at and conveys the right image of the magazine to the audience.

6) A regular magazine buyer - Advertisement for subscription in the box

My target audience is also a regular consumer of music magazines. Therefore, in order to attract them and give them a better deal on their buys, I have included an advertisement in the contents page about subscribing to all 12 issues of the magazine and getting 20% off what they would have to pay if they bought the magazines individually.

6. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?



7. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product? 


1)   In the preliminary production the image background has not been well thought out. In the full product, the background and the other smaller details such as the accessories and the props were given much more thought and everything in the photographs were included for a purpose. I also experimented more with the camera angles, different poses, colourings, lighting, etc in the main production.
2)   Compared to the preliminary production, there is more of variation in the types and sizes of the font which would help sustain the reader’s interest as audiences would get bored easily if everything is in just one type of font. In the main production, I have tried to have subtle differences in font types and still sustain a housestyle in order to not confuse the reader with numerous fonts that are vastly different and to present them with a uniform style that is consistent and helps the reader get familiar with the magazine.

The Final Results

After a lot of consideration, re-consideration, drafts, feedback and revisions, here are the final pages of my music magazine:


The Final Product
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For the front cover, due to the pixelation of the original font for the masthead, I had to change the font to a similar one called 'Bebas'. I also changed the sell-line from 'Get look inside their comeback album' to 'Just Replay is returning with their comeback album - Be the first to know the details!' as I realised that you cannot actually 'look' inside an album and also because I realised that I had not mentioned the name of the artist anywhere on the front cover. 

Here, I have reduced the size of the box advertising the subscription and also changed the language of the advertisement to suit the language used by actual music magazines - such as the use of '12 issues' instead of 'the whole year'. Due to the reduction in size of the advertisement, I have also included more contents such as the 'Artist of the Month'. 

Also, as I was looking through more music magazines and checking for any elements that I had missed, I realised that most of the magazine had a small note on the side of the contents page stating the name of the person who did the cover image, so I added that onto the side of my contents page, too. 





For the double page spread, I merely changed some of the language in the article and adjusted the title a little bit. 
 

More Drafts

After constructing the drafts on DTP, I decided to get some feedback from my teacher. Here's what she had to say:




  

Double Page Draft using DTP

Here is how the double page spread looks like with all the text included:

Double Page Spread Text Draft

Here is a draft of the article on the double page spread:


JUST REPLAY member Rimona has revealed to Music Core that the musical superstars will be soon making their long awaited and anticipated comeback and that their upcoming, as-of-yet-untitled album will be a vast change from their previous albums.
   The  duo have been out of the spotlight for over 18 months, but they weren’t just slacking off; they have been working intensely and meticulously on their forthcoming album. They are currently working on their third studio album  (scheduled to release at the beginning of January)  at the Siwa Entertainment Empire Studios in New York with Grammy Award winning producer Aiden Lee.


   ‘With this album we wanted to show to the world just how much we have grown musically in the past few years’,  reveals Sangma as she takes a break from editing.  ‘With our past few albums, we’ve been producing them with the attitude of learning and experimenting … this time, we’re going to put together all we’ve learned and really let our fans to feel the maturity in the quality of our music.’
   ‘This is the first time we’ve been able to go through each and every aspect of the album with a fine tooth comb. Usually, we just get three months for recording, mixing, filming the music video, etc and it’s always just been rush, rush, rush, got to finish this, got to start that ... We’ve never been able to go through our songs like this and get everything as refined and as amazing as possible.’ Rimona explains. ‘For this album, we allowed ourselves the time and luxury of exploring each and every part of all the songs and really making sure that everything including the lyrics, the layering, the arrangement, the beats, the melody and everything were perfect and conveyed exactly what we wanted to convey to our listeners. It's a great feeling.’
   ‘And especially, this time, we have gone in a completely different direction from our last two albums, so I’m very excited to see how our audiences will respond to that.’ says Sangma anticipatively.
   The duo are infamous for being the chameleons of the music industry and coming back with a different sound and theme each time and have confided in Music Core that this time, instead of having one theme for the whole album, they’ve combined a number of different themes.
   ‘For this album, we wanted each  song to have it’s own story and be unique. Also, we’ve both always wanted to explore all aspects of music and didn’t want to be restricted to a particular sound, so we ending up trying out a variety of genres and styles in this album,  while still keeping elements of our own identity and music style incorporated in the album.’ Sangma explains.
  ‘And we’ve collaborated with many songwriters that we admire and have been wanting to work with like Norah Jones, Imogen Heap, Bruno Mars, Ryan Tedder, and Rodney Jerkins.  We’ve also worked with Far East Movement whom we’ve always admired for their amazing beats. I really believe that this album is something special and different - we’ve got songs with our standard indie/pop vibe; songs with touches of  R’n’B melodies; subtle hip hop beats; rock attitude; slow songs; fun, upbeat songs; as well some that are just acoustic and really simple and light - so it really is just a huge combination of different sounds and  different worlds within the music industry. Trying to skilfully manoeuvre a balancing act between all the different genres was hard but I genuinely do think it ended up creating something really beautiful and exciting. It’s one of those albums that you can just pop on and it’s guaranteed to have at least one or two songs that completely matches your mood at that moment in time. I don’t think there’s anything like it in the market at the moment.’ says Rimona excitedly.
   ‘With this album, we really did just go all out . We’re both strong believers of the saying ‘Never a failure, always a lesson’ and we just want to learn as much as possible now so that we can continue to provide great music to everyone in later years and just keep evolving musically. I think that the attitude to always be willing to learn and experiment is very important to surviving in the music industry as it’s ever-changing and people’s tastes and trends are always changing. We just wanted to give our audiences something fun and different.’ Sangma says.
‘I think out of all our albums, this is the one that I’m most excited for. I cannot wait for it to hit the shelves! I mean, we wanted this album to really be a masterpiece and make our listeners feel something special through listening to our songs. After all, they say that ‘words make you think a thought, music makes you feel a feeling and a song makes you feel a thought.’ We hope that we can connect to our audiences and just let them feel the music that we have created for them. Because of this, we worked extremely hard on this album and just tried our best because ‘a genius can’t win a hard-working person’, right?’ Rimona says with an easy smile. ‘There’s also another saying that says you must concentrate on doing your best, not being the best - and that is exactly what we tried to do. We hope our efforts pay off and that everyone likes what we came up with this time around.’

Just Replay’s fourth album will be out in stores in early January so be sure to hit the music stores and purchase this incredible comeback album because from the preview we heard—it’s definitely going to be on replay worthy.

Rough Draft of the Double Page Spread & Evaluations from Peers

Before continuing on the drafting of the article, I decided to first focus on the layout of the double page spread and see if the photographs look as planned. Here are the rough drafts:




After doing the rough draft, I decided to review it before going any further. To get an objective view of the spread, I asked some friends and peers to have a look at the pages and fill out an evaluation form about what they think. Here are 2 examples of the evaluations that I have scanned: