The Final Results

After a lot of consideration, re-consideration, drafts, feedback and revisions, here are the final pages of my music magazine:

The Final Product

View more presentations from JaeLuver

 

For the front cover, due to the pixelation of the original font for the masthead, I had to change the font to a similar one called 'Bebas'. I also changed the sell-line from 'Get look inside their comeback album' to 'Just Replay is returning with their comeback album - Be the first to know the details!' as I realised that you cannot actually 'look' inside an album and also because I realised that I had not mentioned the name of the artist anywhere on the front cover. 

 

Here, I have reduced the size of the box advertising the subscription and also changed the language of the advertisement to suit the language used by actual music magazines - such as the use of '12 issues' instead of 'the whole year'. Due to the reduction in size of the advertisement, I have also included more contents such as the 'Artist of the Month'. 

Also, as I was looking through more music magazines and checking for any elements that I had missed, I realised that most of the magazine had a small note on the side of the contents page stating the name of the person who did the cover image, so I added that onto the side of my contents page, too. 

For the double page spread, I merely changed some of the language in the article and adjusted the title a little bit.